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Monolith by Zargap Monolith by Zargap
I was going to have this as the front page of my new site but :iconaustintheheller: thought it wouldnt be a good idea to have almost boobies and I decided to go with something else.
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Farallan Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks good, but just be careful with your line work next time. Don't be afraid to go over it again with a thicker lines; it will really help it come alive. I think maybe a thick line around the people and an even thicker line on the border would look pretty good. The thicker lines can also cover up any mistakes you made the first time.

And be careful with the lines for the clavicle and neck. I don't think the clavicle line should be visible all the way like that, and I would've done the line sparingly for those two parts on the girl. And I think the neck on the guy could've been a little thicker.

And this is just a personal thing, but I think maybe the sun should be awake, just to kind of show the difference of night and day. But that's just me ^^;

But other than those things, it's good. It's an interesting concept.
Zargap Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008  Student General Artist
Interesting about the lines. If I were to use this design, I'd probably chop the borders, they were more of guidelines. It's tricky to know when to use a line and when to heavily shade... Thanks :)
Xbutton Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008   Artisan Crafter
Looks very cool

I'd watch out for highlights on the skin, especially on the lady's shoulder, maybe a bit too dark around the white spot.

the water on the dark side looks cool
Zargap Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Student General Artist
Yeah, it was a style thing I tried to do. I shooped it better but I lost that version.
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